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5 Common Business Writing Woes Free AI Editors Can Resolve

With the right free AI editors, you can sort your gibberish into everyday English. Or the tools could inspire you to find the right terms.

In this list, I left out ProWritingAid, copy.ai, and similar tools, which are better writers.

Also not included:

  • Stand-alone browser extensions or smartphone apps
  • Those that offer trials–these cost nothing, but most of them have limits

A few of them might be unavailable outside the U.S. without access through a virtual private network (VPN).

Remember: Don’t rely on free AI editors alone, especially in your first-round editing, because they’re error-prone (like us). They’re not the rake that catches every mistake. 🙂

1. Long words and sentences – They’re often harder to read. Many generative AI writing apps don’t focus on readability. By default, some, like ChatGPT, write at a high school level. If you’ve used Microsoft Word, you’re probably familiar with Flesch-Kincaid reading levels, which measure how understandable writing is at certain education or grade levels.

Solutions: 

2. Incorrect usage – Typos and poor grammar have littered many rough drafts. Sometimes, you’ve spelled the word right but have used it in the wrong context. The “eyes” of AI can spot these and more errors. Beyond spell-check, Grammarly flags grammar failures and suggests better wording. Its open-source cousin, LanguageTool, does the same and can also paraphrase passages.

Solutions: Grammarly; LanguageTool 

3. Abstract terms – Vague words and phrases like “providing solutions” don’t hook readers. Concrete terms are more likely to paint pictures in readers’ minds. If you can’t create images with words, use AI to sketch details. 


Solutions: ChatGPT or Claude via prompts; Wordtune

Example:

A financial advisor’s solution, which may also work as a unique selling proposition (USP): helping entry-level workers manage their money better to save for retirement.

4. Businessese – This formal language businesspeople sometimes speak reeks of jargon and self-importance. The right editing tools turn this gibberish into everyday English. Given some AI apps’ tendencies to write formally, you’ll likely need to ask them to simplify the wording, do it yourself, or use the following tools.

Solutions: Grammarly, The Hemingway App, Ludwig.guru, Wordtune

Grammarly also measures tone. The Hemingway App shows you where to shorten and clarify sections. For phrases that don’t seem to fit, Ludwig spotlights examples of common usage.

5. Blandness – If your content is as exciting as yacht rock, AI editors can add analogies, examples, facts, quotes, or statistics instantly. Use these ingredients sparingly. And remember to check your sources, because AI sometimes fudges details. Try these apps to add spice to entice readers.

Solutions: Wordtune; ChatGPT, Claude, or Bing Compose via prompts

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Do you use AI to edit and proofread? If so, what’s your “go-to” software? Feel free to comment below.

Quotes

“#1 best practice for editors using AI: you MUST fact-check any AI-generated content for plagiarism, falsehoods, outdated information, biased information, and made-up information.” ~ Dragonfly Editorial

  • Published: October 3, 2023
  • Last updated: November 24, 2023

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5 Editing Apps That Improve Your Writing

1. Grammarly – Given the limits of its human programmers, its artificial intelligence isn’t perfect, but among editing apps, it’s still fairly accurate. You get to decide whether to accept its suggestions. The free version checks for errors in spelling, punctuation, and grammar. The paid version does more detailed diagnoses, including scanning for clichĂ©s and the passive voice. It also has a plagiarism checker.

2. The Hemingway App – I can’t rave enough about it. Even with years of writing experience, once I started using it, the quality of my work improved greatly. It doesn’t just determine the reading level, it also highlights long sentences, adverbs, “big” words, misspellings, and the passive voice. But you need to figure out the editing yourself. 🙂 The desktop version is free and you can use the mobile app for a fee.

3. Word Hippo – None other than Ann Handley has anointed it, which makes it gospel — it’s a “must use” to prompt the writing muse. 🙂 This literary “Swiss Army” knife offers everything from a thesaurus to a rhyming dictionary and a word finder. Use it as a desktop or a smartphone app.

4. Word Counter – This web-based app lives up to its name and then some. It also offers grammar and spell-check, a thesaurus, and advice on case style and SEO keyword density. “Auto-save” is another helpful feature. And it tells you how long it takes to read your writing.

5. ClichĂ© Finder – Another one of the “bare bones” editing apps born in the web’s infancy, it spots commonly used words and phrases, which appear in bold red text. It doesn’t suggest alternatives, so you need to do the work yourself. Creating your own similes and metaphors can guide you toward more inspired phrasing.

Apps can’t always catch every mistake. Having someone look over your content and revise it for you can ensure your copy is error-free. Contact me.

Which apps do you use to edit your writing? Feel free to comment below.

Quotes

“I did a couple of writing seminars in Canada with high school kids. These were the bright kids; they all have computers, but they can’t spell. Because spell-check won’t [help] you if you don’t know ‘through’ from ‘threw.’ I told them, ‘If you can read in the 21st century, you own the world.’ Because you learn to write from reading.” ~ Stephen King

“Words — so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them.” ~ Nathaniel Hawthorne

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5 Ways to Improve Your Editing

1. Read – Well-written books and articles can help you improve your editing through exposing you to different words and writing styles. Grammar and editing guides also offer plenty of advice on English usage.

2. Cut – Try removing words from your sentences; if they don’t add to the overall meaning, they’re often not necessary.

3. Get expert help – If you’re uncomfortable with words, or feel you need more than a little advice, talk to someone you trust who knows English well. Ask them to mark up one of your pieces so you can see where you need to improve. Or talk to an experienced pro (like me). Many of us are better at editing others’ work than we are at our own.

4. Use software – Grammar apps and software with spell-check can help. If time is tight, they can ease the editing process, but they don’t catch everything.

5. Practice – As your confidence grows and you gain a better understanding of the basics of good writing, edit others’ work. One way to do this is to join a writing group.

What has helped you improve your editing? Feel free to comment below.

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Quotes

“In art, economy is always beauty.” ~ Henry James

“When in doubt, delete it.” ~ Philip Cosby

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5 Do-It-Yourself Business Writing Proofreading Hacks

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Michelle Troutman

1. Know your weaknesses – Do you tend to write long sentences, repeat certain words, or have other verbal tics? Being aware of your bad habits can help you focus on what to cut in a pinch. For example, you can search your copy for repeated words or phrases and replace them with appropriate synonyms to improve the flow.

2. Change the font size or color – This tip has helped me see my copy in a new way. Errors seem to pop out more, especially after I get used to reading the same text over and over. Just remember to change it back to normal later, if necessary. 🙂

3. Remember readability – Microsoft Word and similar software use the Flesch-Kincaid readability scale to score your writing by grade level. Grade eight or nine is common for easy reading, but some grammar experts suggest you aim for a sixth-grade level. The Hemingway App follows an algorithm. To improve readability, use few, if any, words with three syllables or more. And shorten your sentences.

Example: Individual (five syllables: in/di/vid/u/al)
Revised: Person (two syllables: per/son)

4. Use a checklist – Grammar and style books sometimes have lists of common errors at the back, which can be especially helpful for new writers. This is among the proofreading hacks that are best to save for last. My newsletters also offer some usage tips.

5. Keep it in context – Does everything make sense? Does it add up? Names and numbers can be easy to gloss over. Even if every statement is correct, your wording could confuse readers. This is a sometimes overlooked part of making your writing easy to understand.

What are some of your favorite proofreading shortcuts? Feel free to comment below.

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Quotes

“Let the reader find that he cannot afford to omit any line of your writing because you have omitted every word he can spare.” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson

“Write without fear. Edit without Mercy.” ~ Unknown

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5 Ways to Say More With Less in Your Business Writing

Ever slogged through a sentence like this — when you could say more with less?

“We’re writing to let you know that we’ve made several important updates regarding the current policies in effect, which we believe will make a difference going forward.”
A handwritten French assignment with red ink corrections and critical comments like "BAD" and "Careless copying." A note says, “A very poor paper, showing that you have not learnt your work.”

It’s like swimming through molasses. Clear writing (and decent editing) cuts the drag.

The secret to finding the sweet spot?

Balance brevity and clarity: use enough words so readers get the full meaning. Don’t meet them halfway through run-on sentences or fragments; sometimes a few extra words give them the context they need to prevent confusion.

❌ Because regulatory approval is still pending.
âś… We delayed the product launch because we’re still awaiting regulatory approval.

Work harder so your readers don’t have to. Pretend you’re editing a movie: if it doesn’t move the plot forward, it hits the cutting room floor.

How to Say More With Less in Your Business Writing

1. Cut the qualifiers – “Very,” “really,” and other qualifiers can bloat your writing. Remove them to say more with less.

Example: “We’re really excited about our new product.”
Revised: “We’re excited about our new product.”

(Or better yet, show why.)

Bonus tip: Scan your drafts for these fillers and ask, “Does the sentence lose meaning without it?” If not, leave it out. Or as William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White said in “The Elements of Style,” let every word “tell.” Don’t use two words when one will do.

2. Watch your adverbs – These words usually end in “-ly.” Use adverbs sparingly, only when you need to make a point. They’re usually a sign you should trim the fat because your verb isn’t working hard enough. Instead, try a stronger one.

Example: “The car rolled down the driveway slowly.”
Revised: “The car crawled down the driveway.”

One word > three.
More meaning, less mess.

3. Adjective objectivity – Not all descriptors are bad, but many are unnecessary. Often, you don’t need them unless they’re relevant to your subject matter.

Example: “Made of high quality steel, these knives are tough enough to slice tin cans.”
Revised: “Made of quality steel, these knives slice tin cans easily.”

Another example: Our innovative, groundbreaking, world-class solution improves workflow.

What does “world-class” add that “improves workflow” doesn’t already imply? Can you show the result instead — like “cuts busywork by 50 percent”?

Keep what matters. Cut the rest.

4. Save on specifics – Sometimes less detail = more clarity. Your readers want the takeaway, not the entire backstory. Move from the specific to the general:

Example: “We toured every split-level between 3rd and Pine before settling on our fixer-upper.”
Revised: “We toured dozens of homes before choosing our fixer-upper.”

Need to give more context? Instead of writing a description or explanation, link to more information or add a visual. You don’t have to cram every fact into one sentence.

5. Think visual appeal – You can also say more with less by changing how your words appear. Help readers see the point.

  • Highlight key points; use bold sparingly
  • Chunk information blocks into two columns
  • Turn a long paragraph into a tidy list
  • Consider a chart or infographic when things get complex — and attract attention

Bust the wall of text to give their brains a rest — and their eyes a place to land.

Great writing doesn’t stop at fewer words. It aims for the right ones to make a point. It’s “He moved quickly” vs. “He dashed.” One word = more impact.

Word choice, not word count, matters the most.

When you hit “delete” on that clever metaphor you spent ten minutes crafting, it can hurt (been there, done that!). To soothe the pain, know your readers will see the meaning clearly without the clouds — and your words hold more weight.

And if you’re unsure, a second set of eyes can help you prune your words for stronger phrasing.

Sharpen your image

What are some of your favorite ways to say more with less? Feel free to comment below.

QUOTES

“I would have written a shorter letter, but I did not have the time.” ~ Blaise Pascal

“The poem is a form of texting…it’s the original text. It’s a perfecting of a feeling in language — it’s a way of saying more with less, just as texting is.” ~ Carol Ann Duffy