5 Common Blogging Mistakes You Could Be Making

1. No “calls-to-action” – This is one of the most common blogging mistakes I see. And it’s easy to avoid. If you sell a product or a service, include a plug to contact you for help or a link for more information. It doesn’t always have to be at the end, either.

2. A boring title – The headline is usually the first thing your readers will see. Ideally, it’s short and spicy while it hints at the topic covered.

Example: “Things to Do in L.A.”
Revised: “8 Ways to Have Fun in L.A. for Less Than $200”

3. Not asking readers to comment – Besides reading (and writing) blog posts, I enjoy readers’ comments about them. Some posts don’t end with questions to encourage replies. Ask readers what they think, how they could do it better, or any number of questions that can’t be answered with a “yes” or a “no.” It helps build a sense of community.

4. A lackluster opening – Write an opening sentence that will entice people to read the entire piece. It doesn’t have to be terribly original — you don’t have to set the bar high — but, at least make it a true statement. Or open with a question. Surprise us a little.

Example: “Maine drivers are familiar with hazardous weather conditions.”
Revised: “Winter is no stranger to the 207. Raise your hand if you passed your driver’s test in a Nor’easter.” (The Law Offices of Joe Bornstein blog)

5. No subheadings – I like subheadings in posts longer than 600 words. They make the rest of the text easier on the eyes and add to the overall flow.

 

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Quotes

“Don’t focus on having a great blog. Focus on producing a blog that’s great for your readers.” ~ Brian Clark, Copyblogger.com

“For bloggers, the deadline is always now. Blogging is therefore to writing what extreme sports are to athletics: more free-form, more accident-prone, less formal, more alive. It is, in many ways, writing out loud.” ~ Andrew Sullivan, “Why I Blog,” The Atlantic

How to Create a Great Newsletter for Business

Newsletters don’t merely inform — they’re also effective tools to connect with readers to subtly sell them on a product, a service, or a cause.

To create a great newsletter for business, it helps to know the content to feature in every issue and its length. Consistency is important to build trust and so that readers know where to look for the information they need and want.

Your content should be easy to create to save everyone’s time and be easy to read. Here’s how to create a great newsletter for business.

E-newsletters and e-blasts

An ideal length is 600 words. It’s enough for snippets on one or more topics — the fewer, the better, to keep readers focused, per newsletter studies.

Eblasts are good for short news items and are generally 500 or fewer words. They can feature one or two items with copy that links to more information at a website.

Either way, it’s best to link as much as possible to shorten the copy and make it easier to scan; links help emphasize the text, too.

No matter the content, include the date or the month and year, links to your social media sites and email address, your mailing address, with links to forward the newsletter and to unsubscribe, according to the CAN-SPAM Act (U.S.).

Your most important, eye-catching copy should be at the top to entice people to read more. An engaging subject line can also influence opens.

Essentially, the less said, the better, done in an intriguing style that doesn’t reveal everything all of the time.

Like blog posts, you can include “calls to action” to get leads.

Print Newsletters

These tend to work best at one to four pages long — roughly 2,000 or fewer words, depending on how you format the text. Anything longer than six pages creeps more toward magazine territory, which is fine, if you truly need all of that copy (and design).

For more than a few pages of text, breaking it into columns makes for easier reading. Graphics and photos work well to enhance the text, too. A logo at the top, with a masthead that shows the issue date and how to contact staff, looks professional.

For more advice, read five elements of effective e-newsletters for business.

Need help learning how to create a great newsletter for business? Want some thoughts on yours? Get a free e-news audit today!

What do you think about newsletters?

5 Elements of Effective Newsletters for Business

DISCLAIMER: The following emails — as examples of effective newsletters — don’t necessarily reflect my beliefs. I’m not affiliated with their creators, either. I simply admire their work and present it for educational purposes only.

1. Brevity – I subscribe (pardon the pun) to the notion that people don’t like to scroll much for information. The average e-newsletter should be less than 1,000 words. Just tell us what we need to know.

Example: The Conservation Law Foundation E-News

The CLF does well at consistently featuring short content that supports their mission. News items with catchy headlines at the top link to more info at their website to drive more traffic to it. It’s enough to incite action among liberals and conservatives alike.

Because the CLF doesn’t tell the reader everything, the reader becomes curious enough to click on the links for more info. An effective “call-to-action” for donations is at the bottom of each e-newsletter.

2. Error-free – Nobody’s perfect. Mistakes happen in all types of content.

Example: MICS UNICEF Newsletters

The MICS (Multiple Indicator Cluster Surveys) UNICEF newsletter regularly features clean, tight copy written in British English to give readers the results of surveys of children and women that the organization has conducted in over 100 countries.

3. Engaging – Your content must be interesting and useful for your audience to keep them reading and subscribing. The copy shouldn’t blatantly be an advertisement. That’s not always easy.

Example: MaineHealth Health Matters e-Newsletter

The MaineHealth e-newsletter truly informs, with healthful recipes, links to health tips and videos, and news everyone can use.

4. Organization – How content is presented — the text alongside the graphics — really affects how we absorb information in effective newsletters. If it’s well-formatted, everyone finds it easy to scan quickly.

Example: MaineGeneral HealtheMatters

MaineGeneral Health is one of my healthcare providers, so I subscribe to their newsletter. They present their information in a visually appealing way while projecting a positive image of their organization to build trust to keep patients and get donations. Donors can give money with one simple, easy-to-find click.

5. Originality – No one wants to read a “McNewsletter” that’s available elsewhere. Effective newsletters make reading a uniquely enjoyable experience.

Example: The Maine Humanities Council compiles their intellectual, thought-provoking content, such as news about upcoming events and poems by poet laureate Gary Lawless, with flair in “Notes from an Open Book.”

Need help with your newsletter? Contact me for a free e-news audit today! No strings attached. Just good, solid advice to help you increase profits and get more leads.

Nonprofit Fundraising Tips & Creative Nonprofit Marketing Ideas

Andy Robinson speaks at the Focus on Friendraising MANP seminar. At a recent Maine Association of Nonprofits workshop, nonprofit fundraising expert Andy Robinson presented interactive exercises to teach attendees how collaboration can build relationships with donors.

This recap includes exercises to help you improve your own non-profit fundraising and marketing efforts. These nonprofit fundraising tips can also apply to other industries.

Why Donors Give: Building the Case for Funding

1. Name three things your organization does well.
2. What makes your group unique?
3. Market segmentation: Who are you trying to reach (audiences for education, service delivery, fundraising, advocacy, collaboration, etc.)?
4. Recount a favorite anecdote or example that describes the impact of your work.

Good stories have a beginning, a middle, and an end. They evoke emotion, and a visual story connects with people, is relatable, and can be used as a non-profit fundraising pitch; an attendee suggested that board directors relate a success story at the beginning of board meetings to open a discussion with members. Robinson also recommended a “Mission Moment” — a tour of a nonprofit’s facilities to later discuss with members why they’re on the board and why they care about the organization’s mission.

Features and Benefits: What Are We Selling?

One of the greatest mistakes in fundraising for nonprofits is selling features, not benefits.

As Robinson stated, the difference between a feature and a benefit is at the heart of marketing theory; you describe something by listing its features, and you sell it through naming its benefits.

Note the features and benefits of a large spoon to better understand the difference between the two and to sharpen your case and your pitch. The spoon’s features include “the shiny, stainless steel alloy” and its “nonporous” material; its many benefits can range from “easy to clean” to “you can heat it and use it to push up your eyelashes.”

Elements of the Case Statement

Your mission states your purpose. Robinson named famous taglines that imply or state directly why certain well-known nonprofits exist:

1. “A mind is a terrible thing to waste.” (United Negro College Fund; now College Fund)
2. “Together, we can save a life.” (American Red Cross)
3. “When you can’t breathe, nothing else matters.” (American Lung Association)

After the mission, in a case statement, people should list their goals, review what they’ve done so far, discuss board and staff roles, determine a fundraising plan, and attach financial statements from the prior fiscal year and a current budget.

Robinson sees a fundraising plan as helpful for grant writing as an “uber” document to draw information from and as a vision exercise for board and staff to collaborate and learn what they need to do or do more of.  We can be too close to our work to see it objectively.

Pitching Your Project: Meeting With the Funder

In a group of three, each person should play a different role as either a grant seeker, a foundation officer, or an observer, and at the end, critique the grant seeker’s funding presentation.

This exercise helps people develop confidence and clarify their pitches — how they present their work, to develop empathy for the person on the other side of the relationship — the grantmaker — and to improve listening skills.

Robinson suggests that if you don’t know, look it up; don’t make up anything or promise more than you can deliver, and don’t be afraid to ask questions.

Being an Ambassador for Your Organization: Word-of-Mouth Marketing

·         Marketing a nonprofit: more than promotion ·         Multiple strategies = big results
·         Competition: 3,000 messages a day ·         Word of mouth is still the #1 strategy
·         Repetition: the rule of 27 ·         Everyone represents, like it or not

 

Even in the era of social media, the most effective marketing strategy is word of mouth.  Robinson taught everyone how to engage potential supporters, develop compelling messages, and to deliver them effectively.

“Marketing is about being really good about what you do.  You have to be great before you’re great,” said Robinson.  Nonprofits compete with “for profits.”

He quoted Guerilla Marketing author Jay Conrad Levinson’s “Rule of 27”: prospects need to experience a marketing message nine times, and then three times before they act on it.

It’s not enough to send a fundraising appeal through the mail; social media and eblasts are important, too. You want to build awareness, raise money, and increase your power.

Active Listening: What Did You Hear?

Focus less on the pitch — what you say about your organization — and more on donors’ needs and interests.

One person should tell the other a story about a favorite relative or their organization, and then the listener should recount the story from memory. The speaker then gives the listener feedback on what he or she might have missed.

Attendees found stories easier to remember if they were visual or had dramatic elements.

Ask Better Questions, Raise More Money

  • What kinds of questions can we ask that are relevant to our work?
  • Engage people with those questions

Robinson is amused (and occasionally annoyed) by the obsessive pursuit of the perfect elevator pitch.

As he says, it’s all about listening. Good things can happen when you describe your organization clearly and concisely, however, the quest for the perfect pitch ignores one essential fundraising truth: listening is WAY more important than talking. Yes, the best fundraisers are good talkers, but even better listeners. They excel at discovering, and then meeting, the donors’ needs.

If you’re too focused on delivering the perfect pitch, you can forget to listen. Good listening lets you customize your responses to address the interests of your potential donor, volunteer, or ally.

Market Segmentation: Setting Priorities and Customizing Your Message

  • Identify three audiences
  • For each audience: name two things you want them to know about your organization and one thing you want them to DO

To Robinson, awareness campaigns are a pet peeve; he believes all nonprofit fundraising marketing campaigns are about raising awareness.

One Minute of Fame: Crafting Your Elevator Pitch

Many people fear public speaking. If your board or your staff can’t or won’t speak on your behalf, you’ll miss many marketing opportunities. This is helpful when your colleagues need to find the right words to speak about your org. with passion and precision.

Pick your audience and name it; it could be anyone involved in your fundraising campaign: a combination of board, staff, and volunteers.

In a group of five, each person has one minute to deliver his/her elevator pitch: “What you want them to know and what you want them to do.”  Group members then critique the elevator pitches.

Robinson suggests videotaping yourself for practice. It’s not what you learn, but how you apply it.  Effective pitches clearly and concisely tell a story that connects with listeners and invite and inspire action.

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5 Ways to Get Customers to Love Your Writing

1. Edit.  Some of us don’t want others to see rings around our collars or dandruff on our shoulders because we want to leave a good impression. Likewise, the quality of your writing affects your business or organization’s image. Take care to rearrange jumbled words, remove unnecessary apostrophes, add any missing commas, and to downsize letters that shouldn’t be capitalized. It will make your writing easier on the eyes and the ears.

2. Be active. Sentences about actions done “by” someone or something are a sign of the passive voice.

You can’t always avoid the passive voice, but many times, your sentences will be shorter and people will read them more easily if you rework them. Too many sentences in this style can make people struggle to finish reading.

Example: The telephone pole was hit by a car.

Don’t be afraid to enliven and embolden your passages. “A car hit the telephone pole” is shorter and stronger.

3. Omit needless words.  Don’t use two words when one will do. These days, for busy customers, the fewer words, the less time it takes them to read. You don’t need to write a novel to get your points across.

4. Junk the jargon. Or, at least, explain it to those who aren’t in your industry; to them, it is like trying to understand a foreign language. Plain English should be the official language of bureaucrats and businesspeople in English-speaking countries.

5. Maintain your balance. Too much information, especially if it’s disorganized, can confuse readers and turn them away. With a length in mind, it’s better to plan the scope of your piece ahead of time. Use headings and bullet points to separate large blocks of text or use a table of contents to guide readers through longer works.


Quotes

“Good sense is both the first principal and the parent source of good writing.” ~ Horace

“Writing is thinking. To write well is to think clearly. That’s why it’s so hard.” ~ David McCullough


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Michelle Troutman
classywriting.com